Held by Cement

Trifextra: Week 102

This week we’re asking for exactly 33 of your own words about love gone wrong.  But we’re asking that you not use any of the following words:

love
sad
tears
wept
heart
pain

 

I made you known; you helped me grow

We gave new hope; gave off a glow

Of shy beauty, resilience;

We attracted life and lens

Until, dear Wall, you crumbled

And I tumbled.

-Sunflower

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22 comments on “Held by Cement

  1. Love the protagonist-twist here; not knocking them at all, but most of the stories for this challenge are about human beings. Kudos for taking a different tack with it (one “lover” living, and one never alive, unless the wall maybe had lichen or something growing on it). Again, bravo!

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